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[livejournal.com profile] saturniia just broke me.

She suggested Bill/Gambit/Oz for further red-hair sex.

Um.

Uh.

Erm.

Yes. Please?

I am seeing a guitar and dragonhide leather and a game of poker and smoke everywhere. Jackets scattered haphazard, shirts, trousers, boots. Lots of boots, black leather boots, brown leather, thick fingers, full lips, that slow grin (three different, but oh so slow and sexy).

Okay. This has to be written. A lot.

I need an icon. Or, you know, 100. Woah.

Um. A snippet :D

Date: 2005-10-20 04:40 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetandlace.livejournal.com
The room was littered with smoke and the light was down to pin-pricks, now, three different slouched forms over chairs, heads bent close to the table.

Cards were sweaty in hands; Remy had his feet, ankles crossed, on the table, and Oz could smell the leather from his own place, short-sleeved , a beaded wrist flicking as he tossed in his bet. He wasn't speaking much, but that was to be expected; Bill carried the conversation and Remy supplemented, the glow behind his eyes lighting through his arm when he tried to make a point.

It didn't seem strange; everyone was different here. Psimitars and wands and the faint edges of a primal snarl were par for the course. The beaten leather of Bill's jacket (looked like hide) scraped soft over the table as his money landed atop Oz's, looking over at him with a drawling smile, matched with his low, "Remy, are you in?"

"Such an offer I cannot refuse, mon ami," came his assured reply, and with a glinting flash, his bet landed atop the other two.

Oz ran a hand through his hair and raised an eyebrow, laying a card down in front of him. The game was ready to begin.

Re: Um. A snippet :D

Date: 2005-10-23 10:04 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] escritoireazul.livejournal.com
Oh my. Oh wow.

I love this snippet, I love the details, the tiny little layers which build into this gorgeous scene. I really like Bill's drawling smile, and the way Remy gestures to make a point, the way his eyes light up his arm.

This is amazing. Thank you for writing it for me! The game, oh the game is beginning, even though they're in the middle and oh. Perfect. I love Oz, and Bill, and Remy here. It's wonderful. Thank you, thank you, thank you.

Re: Um. A snippet :D

Date: 2005-10-25 02:50 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] velvetandlace.livejournal.com
Thanks! :) It's not the kind of thing I'd usually write, but, oh, what can I say? It grabbed me. I might write more at some point...

Re: Um. A snippet :D

Date: 2005-10-25 01:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] escritoireazul.livejournal.com
I hope you do write some more, it was wonderful.

I love the feeling when something grabs you, something you wouldn't have written on your own, but which turns out well none-the-less. I think this is why I do ficathons, because it broadens what I would have written on my own.

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