feedback for melannen

This is feedback for melannen in iamtheenemy's feedback challenge. It is cut because sometimes I do not know when to stop rambling (even though I still feel I should have said even more).

( lots of feedback for Harry Potter stories mostly )

This was a really great idea; I had a lot of fun reading the work of someone I'd never even heard of, much less read before. I think I need to spend some more time reading and feedback all sorts of people (when, I don't know, I really need a way to stop time so I can do this, work, write, and still sleep sometime--that or a body which doesn't need sleep. That's my ideal).

excerpts from my works in progress

I need to head to bed soon; though normally I'm off on Saturdays, I'm going in for a couple of hours tomorrow to cover the office while L., the actual guy working in the office tomorrow, can help install a windshield. Not just any windshield, but a nice eighteen wheeler windshield. Not a split one, either, which I could have helped set, but a full one, too big for any one person.

So a couple hours at work, and then I'm off to the post office, and then I'm home because thestalkycop and I have plans to talk and plot and write. We were up way too late last night doing just that. I planned on writing tonight, and emailing it to her so it would be there when she woke up, but then I remembered I had to finish and clean up my feedback for melannen, so no writing for me.

While I wind down, I'm going to post excerpts from my stories, something I've seen all over.

( Cut because I never post just one line. )

I have a hard time titling stories until I have them almost done.

I thought about going to the movies after work today (we have Glory Road and Underworld: Evolution right now, and a couple others I'd like to see) but I couldn't be bothered. Mostly because the ones I really want to see (Transamerica and Brokeback Mountain) we will never get any closer than St. Louis (and I'm not driving to St. Louis again for awhile, not after the last time) and I couldn't fathom going out in public after the week I've had. I am over-stimulated, over-socialized, and I needed time alone, which I got.

I watched High School Musical on Disney, which was actually mostly cute, and was thrilled to learn Amanda Mischalka (I think I just butchered her name) is in an upcoming made-for-tv Disney movie, because it means there will be more pictures of her floating around, and as she's the closest approximation of "Queertet Revisited" aged Anna, this is a good thing.

Bed now.