This is feedback for melannen in iamtheenemy's feedback challenge. It is cut because sometimes I do not know when to stop rambling (even though I still feel I should have said even more).

( lots of feedback for Harry Potter stories mostly )

This was a really great idea; I had a lot of fun reading the work of someone I'd never even heard of, much less read before. I think I need to spend some more time reading and feedback all sorts of people (when, I don't know, I really need a way to stop time so I can do this, work, write, and still sleep sometime--that or a body which doesn't need sleep. That's my ideal).