How could I mind? This is FANTASTIC! What a nice companion piece; it makes me want to write more and read more.
I love that she sees the similarities between Letty and herself and that she knows she can never be dominant or drive that way or have all of Dom to herself.
These lines just killed me:
During the day he's mine though and into the night, when we make love, but when he dreams, he belongs to her still. In his sleep, he whispers her name.
He's with her still, living another life, one I have no part in. In his dreams, he still belongs to her.
Amazing and painful and so terribly sweet. Thank you for writing this in response to my ficlet! I love it!
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Re: Couldn't resist, hope you don't mind... "He thinks of her..."
Date: 2005-03-03 07:50 am (UTC)I love that she sees the similarities between Letty and herself and that she knows she can never be dominant or drive that way or have all of Dom to herself.
These lines just killed me:
During the day he's mine though and into the night, when we make love, but when he dreams, he belongs to her still. In his sleep, he whispers her name.
He's with her still, living another life, one I have no part in. In his dreams, he still belongs to her.
Amazing and painful and so terribly sweet. Thank you for writing this in response to my ficlet! I love it!