Riddick fic: some things should hurt

[escritoireazul]

title: some things should hurt
author: Carla
disclaimer: Riddick belongs to David Twohy, etc.
setting: pre-Pitch Black
summary: some things hurt. some things should hurt, but don't.

cross-posted to riddick100.

Fingers in a flame should hurt.

Riddick, at ten, knows pain. He remembers what it’s like to be strangled. He wakes up some nights and bites back screams until his throat aches. In his nightmares he can feel the umbilical chord against his skin and hears laughter even when he’s almost awake and sleep is fading. Riddick knows how cartilage feels when it breaks beneath his fist and how easily skin splits on the edge of a blade.

He pinches the fire and it fizzles out. Riddick looks at his fingertips, makes a fist, wonders what else he can end.



Man, I just can't stop with the drabbles these days. I'm avoiding rewriting a maze scene in the novel, which is harder the second time around than I expected. Gah.

Comments

[secondarysanity.livejournal.com]

Hi there! XD

Thanks for all the comments! I normally don't get as much feedback, since all my friends participate in different fandoms, so all your comments gave me a warm fuzzy feeling. ^_^

I added you to my friends list, as well as my own custom friends list.. i.e the inner circle of friends who get to see things in my journal that nobody else does. ;x

<33!

[escritoireazul.livejournal.com]

Aww, yay, I feel all special-like now! I will warn you that I do ramble a lot, so if you ever get tired of too many comments, just tell me to hush. I'll be quiet for a little while. Heh.

[secondarysanity.livejournal.com]

Pfft. I don't get tired of talking about obsessions. :X

I feel like I don't have enough friends on LJ, and I feel like I have even less that I have lengthy conversations with, so you're awesome.

[illmantrim.livejournal.com]

ooo excellent!