Oh, dude, no worries at all. This feedback is amazing, and I'm just glad to know you liked it.
I have this awesome image of her walking into a room in Serenity and triggering the memory like a hologram, playing out in front of her.
Yes, this is it, this is exactly what I was trying to get across, that image of River and the memories playing around her, visible but not quite tangible. I'm so glad that came across.
I’m entranced by the idea that River is there, bearing witness to the end of the universe.
As soon as I heard the song, and read the lyrics, I knew this was what I was going to write, River at the end, bearing witness, and all the things she carries with her, all the people who have left her alone. I'm so glad it turned out to be a beautiful, lyrical story, because that's what I had in my head, a song for a tale.
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Date: 2008-09-23 08:53 pm (UTC)I have this awesome image of her walking into a room in Serenity and triggering the memory like a hologram, playing out in front of her.
Yes, this is it, this is exactly what I was trying to get across, that image of River and the memories playing around her, visible but not quite tangible. I'm so glad that came across.
I’m entranced by the idea that River is there, bearing witness to the end of the universe.
As soon as I heard the song, and read the lyrics, I knew this was what I was going to write, River at the end, bearing witness, and all the things she carries with her, all the people who have left her alone. I'm so glad it turned out to be a beautiful, lyrical story, because that's what I had in my head, a song for a tale.
Thank you so much for this great feedback.