How have I missed this journal? I liked it, and then by part 3, I loved it. Lucy and Star-nice relationship to explore (the two women of Michael's life; of vampire lives-unlives). Star doesn’t remember in time that she’s supposed to say no.
it’s the same thing she used to do and yet completely different. Star kisses her and wishes she still craved blood.
So cool. God I suck with feedback. I'll try it this way- this drabble is the ocean, and waves that promise to crash but get shy around the release and inhale themselves back into the sea. It's loneliness. Star should know better than to miss the blood, but when you've been a sorta vamp, how do you go back to beating hearts and flightless travel? Of course she doesn't eat anymore. Does Maria know anything? I love Lucy owning the store.
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Date: 2008-01-30 09:54 pm (UTC)I liked it, and then by part 3, I loved it. Lucy and Star-nice relationship to explore (the two women of Michael's life; of vampire lives-unlives).
Star doesn’t remember in time that she’s supposed to say no.
it’s the same thing she used to do and yet completely different.
Star kisses her and wishes she still craved blood.
So cool. God I suck with feedback. I'll try it this way- this drabble is the ocean, and waves that promise to crash but get shy around the release and inhale themselves back into the sea. It's loneliness. Star should know better than to miss the blood, but when you've been a sorta vamp, how do you go back to beating hearts and flightless travel? Of course she doesn't eat anymore.
Does Maria know anything? I love Lucy owning the store.