!!! Oh wow, this is wonderful. I love the idea of Raven's focus on who she is, first rejecting both Charles and Erik's ideas of her, then being lost, until she realises that she's built herself again out of family and family=home. This is beautiful writing, and I especially like the repeated "she's not, she's not, she's not" giving way to a tentative "and she’s, and she’s, and she’s…" before allowing all her facets and faces to show. Thank you so much and congratulations on 15 years!
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Date: 2014-06-13 04:09 am (UTC)