Hee, you know? I thought something was familiar about the style of this story, and I couldn't quite put my finger on it. It probably had to do with reading so many of your stories in preparation for writing your remix!

I honestly can't remember if I commented on this or not, because LJ was being weird and kept throwing comments back at me. But I really liked the unpeeling-the-onion feel of the original (backwards) version, and I liked what you added to it, especially in the Bobby-Rogue-Pyro scene.