I'm delighted to find a Rachel/Ivy fic. I just read the series and I'm completely in love with the pairing. When I ran out of books, I was hoping to find some good fic online.
I like the style of interruption you use--it's almost Faulknerian at times. And that use of enjambment to make the object simultaneously the subject of the next verb was especially nice!
I'm disappointed to read in the comments here that so many people think Harrison isn't going to let Rachel/Ivy happen, but maybe they hadn't read For a Few Demons More yet. My concern is that Harrison is just going to drag it out too long, one obstacle after another keeping them from a full-fledged relationship. It's already so frustrating!
If you've written or know of any more Rach/Ivy fic, I'd appreciate knowing about it.
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Date: 2007-06-12 03:45 am (UTC)I like the style of interruption you use--it's almost Faulknerian at times. And that use of enjambment to make the object simultaneously the subject of the next verb was especially nice!
I'm disappointed to read in the comments here that so many people think Harrison isn't going to let Rachel/Ivy happen, but maybe they hadn't read For a Few Demons More yet. My concern is that Harrison is just going to drag it out too long, one obstacle after another keeping them from a full-fledged relationship. It's already so frustrating!
If you've written or know of any more Rach/Ivy fic, I'd appreciate knowing about it.
What other fandoms do you write in?